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A Minor Announcement

Ahhh, it is Friday, sorry I nearly forgot!

After discussing it with my financial advisor (aka my husband) I have decided to upgrade to the full version of Scribophile.

Currently,  I'm using the free version, which means that I can only post two chapters at a time.  This means that as my story progresses, anyone that wants to critique it that hasn't been following it since I posted the first chapter will be clueless as to the beginning.  Instead of getting good critiques,  I'm getting stuff like "I have no idea who these characters are," and "what's going on in this scene?"  So, for the sake of my story,  I'm springing for the full version.  Critiques that say essentially "I haven't read the beginning" aren't any help to me, and I'm sure the people trying to help me get frustrated when they can't. So, if you want to look me up on Scribophile,  you'll be able to read Om Nom Nombies as I post it, chapter by chapter, and it will all stay posted until a month after the final chapter is up.

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